obvious one

[machinery]

climbing a new horizon
clawing penetration into the sun
sinsiter yellow, breathing pale yellow
explosion of bright detail
obvious one, shine on down
playing a tragedy in the sky
blots of foreplay
and left-behind murders
this is apprantely something
that is absolutely nothing
nothing but our minds in the blue
and our imagination wading its feet
obvious one, won?t you shine down
give me a reminder
show me sin
and I?ll commit
show me wonders
and break them fast
painful times in my life
shoved into notebooks and shoeboxes
show me proof
and bring me to your state of being
enlightened breaths, merciful hands
show me your existance
let me know your name
and I will give you mine?
forgiveness
prays and late night penance
all of this?
just shine on down

[parch]

a little different than i've seen from you
not sure what to make of it
have to get used to it
let it sit on the board so i can feel comfortable w/ it and then come back

[tsilo]

yup..a new one..it's very enigmatic...i could feel the forces working with your poem

[machinery]

yeah, I actually didn't like this one at all....it was in my 'ol Morrison-phase notebook...but parch, you are the one that pointed it out to me...and said you liked it....and wanted it to be one of my 25 in the manuscript.......bastard!!!

but hey, we weren't all there and it was early in the morning! hahah

[parch]

ooops